First Chapter Critique
Opening pages should shine whether you’re trying to catch the attention of agents or readers. If you want to make sure your opening is putting its best foot forward, my first chapter review can help!
I’ll read your first chapter (up to 7,000 words) with an editorial eye, making line edits (with Track Changes on) and providing comments with a focus on:
- Strengthening opening & closing lines
- Grounding readers without overwhelming them with info
- Portraying character, voice, and conflict
This’ll take one to five days.
Cost: $75 for a single pass; $100 for two passes